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Just care! Please.

Poem by: LaceyGerardMonroe

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my seventh piece. Please leave your comments.
A couple of weeks ago I went back to a rehabilitation place for people of psychological problems. Three of us became close friends, me and 2 girls. 1 Had a family member who played for South African Free State rugby team, the Cheetahs rugby. everybody loved her for that but she was the most broken between us. We helped each other out for three weeks. She have gotten much better but the moment she left she left us behind as well. This morning she went back... The rugby player moved yesterday night to Scotland. This is me telling about people who forgets to see does who really cared about, inspired by her.

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Submitted: October 29, 2012

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Just care! Please!

 

You want me only when you need it.

You need me only when you want it.

 

I don't care 

no I don't.

I don't care much,

not very much...

 

Your eyes are filled with tears,

but you smile and look away.

 

They see the smile

and leave the tears.

You threw it all aside.

What would they say if they knew?

 

Your eyes are filled with tears,

but you smile and look away.

 

Nothing matters any more,

no not to you.

You only want it,

only want it.

 

The fame they give you

makes you forget,

forget your tears.

forget your pain.

 

Your so lonely you start to die inside,

but no one really sees it.

Only we do,

but you don't care,do you?

 

They see the smile

and leave the tears.

You threw it all aside.

What would they say if they knew?

 

Your eyes are filled with tears,

but you smile and look away.

 

We try to help you,

even love you,

but they give you a good time,

a drunk time.

 

Booze only goes so far,

fame will soon fade.

As soon as they leave.

As soon as they leave.

 

Your eyes are filled with tears,

but you smile and look away.

 

They see the smile

and leave the tears.

You threw it all aside,

What would they say if they knew?

 

You will see it,

sooon enough,

but I wish I won't

I wish I won't.

Beacoause you will want it,

need me.

You will want me,

Need it.

 

This drug will take you down.

I hope you see it,

I wish you saw it.

 

Please care,

just enough inough to see.

 

Your eyes are filled with tears,

but you smile and look away.

 

 

 

 


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Just care! Please. Just care! Please.

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my seventh piece. Please leave your comments.
A couple of weeks ago I went back to a rehabilitation place for people of psychological problems. Three of us became close friends, me and 2 girls. 1 Had a family member who played for South African Free State rugby team, the Cheetahs rugby. everybody loved her for that but she was the most broken between us. We helped each other out for three weeks. She have gotten much better but the moment she left she left us behind as well. This morning she went back... The rugby player moved yesterday night to Scotland. This is me telling about people who forgets to see does who really cared about, inspired by her.

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