My tenth piece. Please leave comments would love your opinion on this. Also I will love to know what this means to you. This piece can mean different things to different people. I know what it means to me, but what does it mean to you?

Sleep now.

Sleep now.

Let the angels calm you now,

 

Have peace my dear.

I am watching over you.

Have peace my dear.

I care for you.

 

You'll never make me leave.

Let me carry your pain.

You'll never make me leave.

I want to share your pain.

 

You say you will never leave,

Give me a reason to believe.

 

Infect me with your truth

and i'll give you proof,

proof that ill never leave.

You just have to believe.

 

Give me what I need.

Give me a reason to believe.


Submitted: October 31, 2012

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angel plant

Beautiful

Wed, October 31st, 2012 12:13pm

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Thank you so much

Wed, October 31st, 2012 5:25am

FrozenDreamer

It's really well written! I liked it!

Wed, October 31st, 2012 1:56pm

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Thanks so much appreciate.

Wed, October 31st, 2012 7:00am

Buffershaker

Excellent poem rich in imagination and beautifully flowing.It was effortless to read.Like you i also adore angels or the thought of angels being present throughout our lives.

Fri, November 16th, 2012 5:45pm

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Thank you so much I am kind of proud on this poem wont believe me I seldom am proud on my work

Fri, November 16th, 2012 10:34am

Erica Brown

Beautiful, sad and comforting all in the same breath.

Sun, December 9th, 2012 6:01pm

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thank you :)

Sun, December 9th, 2012 12:21pm

Carlee

Amazing. Loved it(:

Mon, December 10th, 2012 1:30am

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oooh tHank you

Sun, December 9th, 2012 6:41pm

Vasanthi Papu

It was good. I like the line - give me reason to believe.
Keep writing.
Review my poems too if you find time.

Mon, December 17th, 2012 1:06am

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Will do. Thank you very much

Mon, December 17th, 2012 4:49am

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