The shadow of my soul.

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My sixth piece. Please leave you comments. This was written when I was getting out of my depression. I wrote a lot back then. For now I will only paste this.

The shadow of my soul.

The shadow past awy

The voices stoped

All now is bright

Am i alright?
 

I feel a fresh breeze

And smell summer roses

Is temparily

or pemanent?
 

The shadow lerks

Voices whisper

I feel a falling

A falling heart

 

Seven days to date

No string of a bow

or clinging of a chain

The shadow yet lerks

The voices whisper.

 


Submitted: October 29, 2012

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raven banks

it's really sad. i'm glad you're alright now. no one should be depressed, everyone should bhave a friend,
raven,

Mon, October 29th, 2012 9:37am

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Thanks its tough but al right.

Mon, October 29th, 2012 3:24am

Dean Talbot

Keep your chin up Lady! I have an old saying that everyone can relate to. "You have to experience the bad before you can recognize and embrace the good!" With that said, you will definitely know when something good comes along, just don't let it go! :)

A very good poem!

Tue, October 30th, 2012 9:28pm

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You know I am a dude right? Lol But thanks bro.

Tue, October 30th, 2012 2:56pm

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