Things have gone so far.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Editorial and Opinion  |  House: Booksie Classic

My ninth piece. This is actually something lighter. more in the form of a love poem but not really. Anyway hope you enjoy it.

Things have gone so far.

I love the way you look,

the way you smile,

the way you walk.

 

Your all I see.

Your all I know.

Your my best.

 

The worst in me,

brings out the bestt in you.

Your on my mind,

all the time.

 

Tell me how things have gone so far?

I'll love to see you get your way.

I'll love to see you have your way.

 

Have you're way with me.

I don't mind.

Your all i see.

 

I hate the way you smile,

and go.

But damn I love to see you leave.

 

You sink into me. 

I'll like to see you have What you want.

Sink into me

 

Ill love to be with you,

one more day. 

Have your way with me.

 

Tell me how things have gone so far...

 


Submitted: October 30, 2012

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Shaekira

Now I'm not a master at poetry, but...this is one of the best damn poems I've read in a while! Kepp up the good work, your really talented with words. ;)

Tue, October 30th, 2012 7:51pm

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Thanks so much. I literally just got a smile on my face reading your comment

Tue, October 30th, 2012 1:18pm

Dean Talbot

That is an AWESOME poem with more than just a hint of erotic to it. I absolutely love it!

Brilliant work! :)

Tue, October 30th, 2012 9:20pm

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Thanks bro I appreciate this

Tue, October 30th, 2012 2:51pm

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Wed, October 31st, 2012 7:23am

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