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I love the beggining, the line;

Chicken? Or fish? Ugh, why is it that all of my friends are getting married?” lol i just thought that that was funny how you did that. =) Plus, i found it really funny that she was talking to her cat about it, ive found myself going over dilemmas to my dog lol.

i liked this beginning though, i think you did a great job with it :)

lol.
good story.
i like the whole plot.
keep it up!
upsate soon please.

lol this is really good, I love how all she cares about is the cat and the tub. Keep me updated!

I love it. You are amazing, you know that? I am SO becoming a fan of yours.

Hi, this is a great start to a novel! I love how you have her confiding to her cat! Something I do too when no-one else is around! Also love how you've kept her personal life in the fog at the moment, keeps us interested and wanting more. I also love your whole style of writing!

An interesting start to this story. Like Tyshawn, I'm wondering what her story is at the moment. However, I'm also wondering about the cat's purpose too. I'm curious to see what kind of relationship the two of them have. Cats, from what I understand, are quite particular about whom they befriend. Are the two of them friends? Enemies? Possibly "Frenemies?"

I guess I'll have to read on.

If I did have a gripe with this from a literary standpoint, its only that the main character's conflict is less apparent than it might be. However, having the mother's phone call at the tail end of it was a nice touch to encourage me to read on further.

Again, like the cat, what kind of relationship will the main character have with her mother? I hope to find out the answers to both these questions in the chapters to follow.

Cheers.

Hey Lady E, I like this novel do you have any more pages? I think you set the tone and have the reader wondering if Alisa is in the middle of a break up, has not met that special guy, what's going on here and whaat's going to happen? Send over more, ok?
cathy

perky story, i like your character's personality. :D
are you still going to continue this?

hahaha! i like this part! nice one felix! :D

This is absolutely wonderful. Your writing is exactly the type I like, and I'm sure a lot of people feel the same! Great, great work :-D

Lydia

I like tony

I like the way you write. Not telling what gonig to happen. So you cant see the whole storie at once. Every chapter you seam to add some thign else to think about.

I liek it cant wait to hear more. I think there is a lot of posibilty wounder what will happen