What a strange little girl I was,
staring at the ocean all day.
What an odd one I was,
perferring to stand there than play.
How bizzare I must have looked to those passing by.
If only they knew that I was planning to fly.
For my wings can't be seen to anyone but me.
The only thing they saw, was my need to be free.
I had no intrest in dolls and toys.
I had no urge to play with other girls and boys.
"What a strange little girl." People would said, "What a strange little girl staring at the ocean all day."
Submitted: September 02, 2009
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To be in our own world of dreams and fantasy can be fun at times. A nice poem about your vision to fly. Well written
Sun, September 6th, 2009 10:47pm
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Thank you!
Mon, September 7th, 2009 4:22am
Loved this one as well. Reminds me of me when I was younger. Always in dream land fighting dragons and trolls. The imagery and flow are great.
Loved it.
Susan
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Thank you. I'm still always in that world. lol
Sat, October 17th, 2009 4:10am
I am 14 and have been writing for two years im writing a book and so many peoms and I'm trying to become better I love your poems and when I get noticed by my writing I will want to meet you
Thu, October 22nd, 2009 4:37pm
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You are such a sweet heart. Thank you very much. I'll be sure to pop over to your page and check your work out as well.
Thu, October 22nd, 2009 10:55pm
I'd so be that girl staring at the ocean all day...
Sun, January 17th, 2010 1:41am
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lol that I was and it was beautiful
Mon, January 18th, 2010 9:04pmFacebook Comments
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hollydar
Absolutely loved this poem - you have a great talent
Thu, September 3rd, 2009 12:25pmAuthor
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Why thank you. That is so kind of you to say!
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