My fallen angel

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

My fallen angel pours out it's feelings .

I have no grace
God, set me free
Sin scars my face
Life should not be

I fell so far
Wings tear off me
Breaking my heart
Please release me

Darkness embrace
Truth of my life
Now losing faith
Trapped in my strife

I shall not wake
This nightmare of mine
My soul it take
For all of time.


Submitted: July 23, 2007

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much2say

Im not sure why, but I loved it. I would go so far to say its the best I read in ages.

Mon, July 23rd, 2007 4:19pm

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Thank you so much. It's a great encouragement to hear that people actually like it!

Wed, July 25th, 2007 3:12am

Treshawna

very good, enjoyed reading it.

Mon, July 23rd, 2007 8:05pm

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Thank you very much.

Wed, July 25th, 2007 3:13am

sineadmc1990

i like this. ^_^

i wouldn't say its the best i've read in a while, but its close ^_^

Sun, July 29th, 2007 6:17pm

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thank you !

Thu, August 2nd, 2007 4:59pm

The Megathon

What a beautiful poem!!! Sad, but beautiful.

Tue, January 15th, 2008 4:44am

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Thnak you! I'm glad you commented, it's great to have reviewers! Yes, most of my poetry ends up being sad or dark, I dunno why. lol anyways, thanks for the reviww... GRETLY appreciated!!!!!!!!!!

Thu, February 14th, 2008 6:24pm

Soriah

It's short but very powerful, not to sound too corny but it speaks to me. Definitely worth an I like it vote! Soriah xx

Wed, November 19th, 2008 12:32am

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thanks xoxo

Mon, July 23rd, 2012 10:19pm

Diksha123

It's nice! ^-^

Tue, July 24th, 2012 5:37am

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Thank You

Thu, July 26th, 2012 3:44am

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