snow queen
Icy hands down my body
chilly flakes on my head
thinking about the weather
while i lay in bed
im looking out of the window
the snow queen has arrived
the scene looks like a winter willow
it brings down the memories i dont like
she dances with her hair flowing
in the moonlight that is glowing
its cold and freezing
but the view is pleasing
Ive turned on my heater
but still i am shivering
she laughs at my movement
and grows cold,simply giggling
my window glass is covered in mist
all i can see is fog
snowflakes are mounting on the panes
yet the snow queen has more to show
beneath the windy dress
i can see snowflakes
her hair is flowing higher
like water in the lakes
snow queen has arrived
i can tell by the chilly feeling
snow flakes are falling down
like salt from the ceilings
now the scene is completely blurred
i have not to say another word
perhaps it could be a new beginning
i must leave bad memories behind
for tomorrow is christmas
and gifts and happiness i shall find
Submitted: January 10, 2011
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Comments
very soft, beautiful indeed!! Certainly felt the cold, wondrous images. GREAT STUFF, I truly enjoyed it!!
Mon, January 10th, 2011 8:09am
thx!kindly advise otherz to read it too!
Mon, January 10th, 2011 10:34am
thx
Wed, January 12th, 2011 10:18am
Nice job! Your inner feelings came through!
Fri, January 14th, 2011 2:42am
thx!
Fri, January 14th, 2011 7:24am
:D EEEEEEEE READ IT IN class too, but today undrstood it n LoV iT tOtAlly :)))
Mon, October 31st, 2011 9:54am
thx hira!...........ur amazing 22!
Mon, November 14th, 2011 5:23pmFacebook Comments
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plzzzzzzz read it n feel free 2 hit d like button.
Mon, January 10th, 2011 7:31am