waiting for you to break down this door.

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when you love some, and they don't love you back...

I know that you’ll never be mine

I’m sure about it this time

I know that I’ll not be fine, but-

All I want is our hands to be en-twined.

I wanted you to be my savior

I wanted you to be my heart

But now you’re away a million light-years

You’re the one that makes my brain start.

I want your lips on my forehead

I want your arms around my waist

Without you I feel so dead

Suddenly life’s lost its glaze.

I feel so in the dark

I keep looking at the door

Waiting for you to break it down

And save me like you did before.

But this time I want you coming as a prince

And not some caring friend

But sadly in pain I wince

As I realize that dreaming will never end.

The truth is that you love someone else

A fact I can never forget, even if I try

And I know every time you see her you’re heart does swell

And pretending not to care, I let out silent cries.

Submitted: December 03, 2010

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I love it. I know the feelings that is presented in this poem and I just absolutly love it. Amazing!

Sat, February 5th, 2011 5:35pm


=) I'm glad i got the feeling across.

i hope the person who its meant for understands it, lol.

ps: thankyou. =)

Sat, February 5th, 2011 8:45pm


i really like love poetry and im going through the same thing now :)

Sun, February 6th, 2011 6:32am



it's a pain in the neck to go through all that trouble...

Hope you get what you want ;)
Best of luck =D

Mon, February 7th, 2011 1:26am

glitter snow426

wow, so sad but beautiful at the same time!! You certainly caught my heart, mind here! Great work, so real and emotional pain, loss.

Sun, February 6th, 2011 8:13am


I'm glad that I was able to convay the message. =)

Mon, February 7th, 2011 1:22am


This is sweet, I'm sure we've all been in this situation at somepoint in our lives, great poem :)
Comment back would be great
Peace Love and Laughter

Tue, February 8th, 2011 1:28pm


=) thankyou.
sure ...

Tue, February 8th, 2011 5:12pm

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