Mon Amour...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This one is from three or four years ago where I had to write a poem for english class. Enjoy.

Crescent moon: filtered through the meager drapes
Luminating her amicable stance
Chills snaking, waking; the ajar door gapes
Dawn alights and captures me in its trance
She aroused, the earth, an ascending sun
She is the glorious moon, most radiant star
Your loves, deadly like a shot from a gun
For I’m engaged in the sensation thou are.

Yet I cannot think that anymore
Not wish for your hand, nor hope for your kiss
You, angel of my nightmare, left me alone
My love for you came straight from the core
Anger grips me, I fade into the abyss
Though, carry on, I shall, to the unknown.


Submitted: April 22, 2012

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Chris Gerard

This is the first of yours I've read, so I'll be interested to compare it with your more recent work. You certainly show your love of words here, and a very fertile mind. On to the next...

Mon, April 23rd, 2012 8:55am

Adam Williamson

Awesome, from what I could understand, I'm a B-tecer what can I say *****

Fri, April 27th, 2012 8:27pm

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Lol thank you :)

Fri, April 27th, 2012 1:29pm

Brighkandy

dis is bootifull

Sat, April 28th, 2012 9:13pm

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Mwah ex oh ex

Sat, April 28th, 2012 2:22pm

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