Are Things Changing?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

I never have any summery's for poems :) ...sorry...

Are things changing?

Are things changing? I can feel something new. Am I ageing?

Is this so hard? Is it an impossibility? It feels like I’m barred in. But is that such catastrophe?

Being safe. Staying in one place forever. Being happy. Staying together forever.

I would say “No”.

How could it be bad? How could it be a catastrophe? How could anyone take it away?

One perfect, Never changing feeing of happiness.


Submitted: May 07, 2011

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PurpleSkittles145

Nice! one suggestion: you should format it like a poem, not a paragraph..bc sometimes it's hard to read when it is a paragraph.

Sat, May 7th, 2011 3:16pm

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erm... paragraphs? erm... yes I know... there is a problem with paragraphing... sorry... I don't know why it comes out like that. I will fix It as soon as possible.

Sat, May 7th, 2011 8:20am

Frank Ramtahal

Summary is a brief statement about your poem or article or story. Check out some of my writing to have some ideas how to write a summary. Become my fan.
Do not be discouraged. You will get there soon.

Sat, May 7th, 2011 6:20pm

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erm.. ok.. thank you...

Sat, May 7th, 2011 12:07pm

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