Poem by: LauraMarieAlways
dark, despair, alone, lonely, sad, fear, sorrow, depressing, hopelessness
Submitted: December 18, 2012
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A Dead Poet
This was beautiful. I love you're word pictures they are perfect. We have all felt like this, well at least I have. It feels so good to know that there are other people like that. I don't want to sound obnoxious, but I think my poem Infinite Thirst is in a way similar to this. If you want, you can read it to get how similar it is to me, but this is beautiful. Congratulations, please keep writing.
Thank you for your kind words. I will definitely give your poem a looksie and I'll comment too.
You've taken me to a place where i'm sitting in front of an alone, depressed, troubled soul looking all stuck in a rut of life and i'm compelled to cheer up the person in anyway i can. Amazing work on this poem!
I don't suppose this person is you though, but if that's the case--you may choose to smile instead which by the way is a poem i've written titled "Can You Smile?"
Hope you can check out my work as well and share your thought:-)
Keep on writing LMA!
Thank you. I am glad to see that you appreciated the poem. And my house is in no way near that messy, but of course I do have those emotions, sometimes. I will gladly take a look at your poem, Maria. ^^~Laura
Very interesting style. I liked it. After reading the last stanza the poem requires second read from the start and then the depth of your emotion could be grasped fully. Nicely done.
If you get time plz visit my page have a look at my work and give your honest opinion.
I will check out your page and comment. If I do not get to it, please, don't hesitate to message me!! I have a poor memory, and sometimes I forget. Thank you for stopping by!
hahhahahahha! hilarious! i love the description, the last paragraph says it all!! good work
Thank you, I'm glad you found the poem interesting.
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