Poem by: LauraMarieAlways
love, depression, religion, thoughts, pain, alone, sad, angst, help, giving, second, chances, needle, thread
Submitted: December 24, 2012
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I find this is very well written and comes from the heart. I like the analogies you make here. Very much enjoyed by me.
yeah broken hands work but not a broken soul. Depression is worse than death. The poem is packed with pathos which leaves a lasting effect.
But booksie is an outlet to burst out our emotions. keep writing.
comment on my works too.
Thank you. I will give your work a look, then ^^~Laura
i try to look for mistakes but its like they are well thought out!
Thank you^^ I'm glad you found no mistakes.
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