It Comes Pouring through the Windows..

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Inspired randomly by an old picture in my room...

It comes pouring through the windows
Like waterfalls of light
I smile at you beside me
As you hold my hand so tight
We both don’t know what we are doing
But somehow we will make it right
We made mistakes, I can admit
But that was all last night
People here surround us
Bustling to and fro
We are stuck in a crowd of thousands
But you promised you won’t let go
Not now, not ever
You continue to hold me close
There are so many destinations
Where we are going, I do not know
Reality seeps into the picture
It is something I reject
I see I am in a different time
But it has no effect
There is a feeling in my gut
That would bring me down except
You are happy, so I am happy
But why exactly I can not recollect
A constant noise follows us
I can hear the people carrying on
The trains coming into the station
You say it won’t be long
I look at the floor because I know
That soon you will be gone
When I wakeup from this dream
We will both be where we belong

Submitted: December 01, 2009

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this was really good, I was very into it :)
I hope you continue writing.
Also I forgot to mention; thnx for the welcome!
hope u can return the favour and read my new novel Forget me not :)
thnx x

Tue, December 29th, 2009 5:52am


will do, and thank you very much

Tue, December 29th, 2009 11:59am


That was beautifully written! I loved it! Thanks for the welcome!

Mon, January 11th, 2010 1:59am


no problem ha ha, thanks for the comment!

Sun, January 10th, 2010 8:39pm

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