Weird Feeling

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Have you ever had that feeling you cant place. Either true love or true hurt, its there.

That feeling

The feeling in the pit of your stomach

No the pit of your heart

The feeling you cant explain

You cant understand



I honestly don't know anymore. I don't know if what Im feeling is hurt, or love. I just know it makes me all stupid, like those girls who post music lyrics on their Facebook's.  It seems to me like they are trying to impress that perfect guy.  If I listen to a song that is what some  \"inspirational\" I get goose bumps, my body get a chill and I start to think to my self Im going to read more, go to sleep earlier, do my hair more, lose weight. And if I did that what kind of person would I be? Would I be that bitch who thinks she owns the world or the same plain girl I am. Then I think maybe being this way is how it has to be. I don't know why its like this. This pretty much sucks. I have things I have gone through where I try to pretend its nothing but if it was nothing how come it changed everything? I hate how you think things are so good but the truth is that some people are just really good at cleaning up the messes, what happens when you run out of cleaner? Everything falls through. Your life is different in the same way. Its like buying knockoff brand of shoes. It looks good until the rubber of the shoe starts to come off, until you either rip it off or throw them away. Sometimes I just smile, I feel loves warmth. It sounds cheesy but I can only think how are thing so perfect? I have friends who love me and I love them, a mom who is always there for me, and a sister who can always make me laugh when I need it. You know that feeling where you just feel important? I feel that feeling would come and visit more often. I just want my life to brighten up, is that too much to ask for. Maybe, for now…I just don't know, I know I'll be okay.

Submitted: July 03, 2011

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Great work and keep writing

Sun, July 3rd, 2011 9:57am

Frank Ramtahal

I am glad that you have the courage to express your feelings. This is good.

Sun, July 3rd, 2011 10:24am


Hi Lauren, 1st of all, hats off. I here bow my head before my monitor screen to you...

That's one of the best poems I've ever read. It shares everything that I am.

I too after listening to any inspirational song would feel that that is the end of my troubles. That I'm actually going to become the perfect one. That I'll become the ideal man. But never had I been successful, until now.

Your poem is an inspiration. *inner voice - oh don't start it again Arun. It's not gonna work this time either... Just shut up.*

Oh right, I guess I've no connection with the word 'inspiration.'

Good work. Keep writing. Keep me updated... It's really nice.

Your friend, Arun...:)

Sun, July 3rd, 2011 11:51am

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