Amanda's Dream World

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
Its about this girl name Amanda and she goes unconscience and enters the fairy world. She sees first hand that the fairy worlds are fighting to take control of each other lands and she trys to help them out to become at peace again with each other.

Submitted: February 15, 2008

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Part One

Once there was a girl named Amanda who loved to read a lot of fantasy stories and she always wished to be in one. Yet it never happened. She yearned and yearned to be in one but each and every day it never came true. Finally one day she kinda gave up on that one little dream of hers and just went on with her life. She didn't believe it would come true no matter how much she thought about it. After a few months later she had forgotten about her dream and went on her merry little way. Just thinking of getting through schooling and have a happy life. Except one day it all changed for her.It turned her life upside down and will never be the same. See she was walking home from school one day just minding her business and looking at the beautiful sky when this crazy car came out of nowhere and hit Amanda. Amanda flew a few feet in the air and landed on her back on the hard concrete. She was unconscience when she woke up thinking she was on earth,yet she wasn't. She was in some dreamland deep inside her mind but she didn't know that. She got up on her feet and wiped her clothes off and was looking around the area. She was kinda confused because this isn't the place she remembers being in. She ponders on where she might be but gave up. She shrugged her shoulders and started walking around the forest, looking at all the beautiful creatures roaming the place. She was very curious on why there were wolves roaming around in broad daylight but it never registerd to her that she was in a magical place where wanything could happen. She sees that the trees are very lush and green and very vibrant for them being only trees. She keeps walking down this beaten old path when she comes to a halt and see something shining a little ways up. She goes forward and sees that there is a massive land open up to become a huge kingdom deep inside this forest. She starts thinking wow this is beautiful ... why haven't I seen this before? Was it here all this time or did it appear out of nowhere? She stares out and sees a huge old looking castle settled in the middle of the kingdom. Amanda starts walking up to the old castle staring up at it as she is walking , being mesmerized by the enchanged castle. She gets up to the little draw brige and waits for it to come down. She gazes at the castle, seeing how it could be in perfect condition when it should be in rubble. Finally the draw bridge comes down and she starts walking across it till half way across, she sees something swimming in the moat. Amanda is curious and walks over to the edge of the bridge and peers down to try and get a better look at what was in the water. Yet she can't see nothing because the water is murky. After squinting for a while she finally sees this beautiful mermaid swimming around. Amanda was awed at this beautiful creature and made her think where she was at once again. She stares at the mermaid, looking at the details of the mermaid's body. Seeing the beautiful design on her skin, like tiny scales yet they made a beautiful and very colorful design around her body. Like symbols of her homeland and what her name means as well. Her hair was magificently pinned up in a ivory seashell tiara. The tiara itself was made from the finest seashells from her land. Yet the most exquisite feature of this mermaid was her eyes. They are very green piercing eyes no one has seen. Looking into them you can see they tell her story, her life without making a sound. For some reason Amanda understood her life and yet she stayed there gazing into those powerful eyes. Amanda felt herself being drawn into a trance and was forcing herself to gain control back over herself. Yet the mermaid kept using every power she had to lure this poor helpless human into her waterworld so she could eat a decent meal in decades. Just thinking about eating a human excited the mermaid and made her become hunger crazy. She smelled fear on this poor human and that woke up her delicious appietie again. She can see in her mind, herself crunching on the delicate bones, and it set the craze of blood and guts over the edge and she needed to act fast to get this creature into the water. The mermaid used all her tactics on this girl but none of the tactics worked. So the mermaid just swam away and was going to hunt her usual prey. Amanda thought it was odd that the mermaid just stared at her and left her standing there at the edge of the draw bridge. Amanda was wondering what the mermaid was thinking but got up and walked towards the castle again. She enters through the huge door and into the next double doors to the fresh courtyard. Amanda loved the courtyard, seeing fresh flowers around the castle, smelling all the wonderful aroma of them as she walks up to the castle. She sees that they never aged nor died. She kinda shrugged it off and went up the concrete stairs and goes up to the castle doors. Amanda knocks softly on the door waiting for someone to open the door to let her in so she can get something to eat and drink. Finally a fairy maid answers the door and asked who she was. Amanda was very shy and started playing with her hands and looked down at the floor. She finally said,"My name is Amanda...... Amanda Rose." She says,"I dont kow where I am at and just want to go home." The fairy maid looked at the girl and was contemplating to let her in or not. The maid finally decided to let the poor girl in. The maid opened the door wider and let Amanda in. She steps in and waited at the door, looking around this castle while the maid was getting the master of this lovely castle. She looks around the castle and sees two beautifully grand staircases that wrap around the main room. Amanda was thinking who could possibly live in this grand castle but after a few mintues someone comes walking in very hard on the wood floor. After sometime of hearing heels on the wood floor the Queen of Twilight Stardust comes storming in. Amanda stares at the Queen not knowing what to do. Amanda was amazed at the beauty of the Queen. She has never seen anything like this in any fairy tales in her life. The Queen was tall for any fairy in the kindgom. She had long ashhy brown hair pinned up with a gorgeous butterfly/dragonfly tiara. Her eyes were magnificent, the color of amethysts that could look straight through your soul. Her complextion was fair but looked like smooth ivory from afar. She had ruby glitter shadow running across her eyes and some ruby glitter on herforehead.Then Amanda looked at her gorgeous outfit. She had on an emerald and azure stripped corset with beautiful gems on it while the rest of the dress was azure except for a huge strip of emerald green in the front. The whole dress had gems scattered around making it shine when the sun hit it. Making it sparkle all day and night. After a while Amanda snapped out of her staring zone and was waiting for the Queen to say something. Yet the Queen just circled around Amanda trying to figure out who this creature was and how she came into this world.After a few minutes of looking Amanda up and down she spoke in a commanding yet settle voice. "How did you get into my realm?",said the Queen and Amanda just messed with her hands and finally said,"Well I was walking home from school and after that I dont remember how I got here. I woke up and this is what i see. Your highness I just want to go home." The Queen said,"You dont need to speak to me so formal, my name is Mystic. Yes i am the Queen and im very interested on how you got in here. See for years weve had this place shut to humans and your the first one to break through the barriers in centuries. Amanda is shock on what she is hearing and her mouth drops open and her eyes kinda bug out. Amanda finally stuttered out,"I'mmm thhhee fiirrst onne ttoo bee hherree iinn cennturries?" Mystic nodded and finally walked around going to a window and stare out of it. Sighing she breathes in the air and says finally after a few minutes,"We just want to know how you got here? Plus are you going to hurt my kingdom?" Amanda gave the Queen a confusing look and finally Mystic explained. SIgh see centuries ago my people and also your people were living together for once and didnt have any problems living in one realm. At that time the kingdom was ruled by My Great grandUncle and he was plotting on taking over the whole world. Ruling over your people as well. When your people heard what was going on they railed up and went against my great uncle and started a huge war against us. It was an ugly war at the time. Many people were lost on both sides of the war and many were wounded. Then that day forward we had banned your people to ever come back. Put a magical spell around our kingdom but after the centuries our magic spell is wearing off. So thats probably how you got into our world.


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