Poem by: led monkeys
love, romance, stars, crush, wishes
Submitted: June 18, 2011
The Last Star
Last Star ,
I See Tonight.
I Wish Upon It,
A Crush For Thee,
But Who Knows If It,
Will Ever Be.
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mhmmm.Such poem is mostly found in poets who persue a career in poetry.I liked your format,and your short sentences give room to think.So,good poem.
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this is pretty cool! xxx
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I love it! Simply breathtaking! Great job.......And though it may be short, it has a ton of meaning to it!:)
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wonderful! it is so soulful
short but effective! :)
Oh, wow, simple but soo great!! I love it!:)
Thanks i like your work also!!
wow. short but powerful.
the lines are short, but the last bit is strong. I love it!
thanks i love your work also
Simple. I like your use of words. :)
gr8 concept.....loved its proceeeding flow.....lst line z remarkable...keep it up..m inspired...!!!!!
thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
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