Poem by: leesah
love, peace, grace, arms
Submitted: April 19, 2007
don't know where I'm going
seems like I'm pausing
for too long
still my home is far
much too far from here
And I'm feeling I should live
beyond those broken skies
where I can be in arms of loves
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Good point. Thoughtfully made. You write as though you have experienced the grace you seek. I can read this poem again and again and the meaning, for me mind, gets deeper.
Well thank you craaig...I'm really glad you took the time
This is a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the great work.
Thank you so much jen, I'll try to keep up
Beautiful, Leesah. It really is. Even the words and flow are full of grace, such wonderful use of language.
I love it!!
I'm really glad you liked it....I wanted to draw it out a bit more, buuuuut....I couldn't go further...thank you Dawn for your comment, always love to hear what you have to say
It's almost as if you wrote this for me... and I thank you... awesome words on paper!!!... I can totally relate to every feeling... check out "Left To Ponder"
Well thank you so much ddrandall....I'm glad you can relate..I'll hop on over to check out 'left to ponder'..here's to writing!
Well written, with a lovely message for inspiration. Never give up, never admit failure, Onwards and upwards :)
Yes, like that, never give up, never admit failure...thank you
You are a master.
Me? nooo...that is definately a first for me. You are being toooo too kind rod...nonetheless, I love to hear what you have to say...
beautiful, leesah---i feel that way too--like I'm in between places and not sure where it's taking me, but not afraid to find out--if that makes any sense ??? :)
Yes, like...'i'm ready..let's go and get out', thank you for that email Z, you really don't know how I needed it...it was a very hard, long day and that made me smile...so here's a big hug for you!
The radiance of who and what you are blazes through. In so feew words, you have redifned hope. Wonderful work.
Thank you AS...always welcome your comments
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