Poem by: leesah
Submitted: March 02, 2007
love flees and floats
can't seem to catch you
I run towards your eyes
Like you're my home
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nice one--I love them short and sweet....you have really said so much with so few words..to me, that's pure poetry !
I think you can say it just how IT is! Muchas Gracias Z, sending you good vibes friend:)
Thank you friend:)
Love flees and floats,
Can't seem to catch,
I run. Your eyes
Are like my home
I can't resist taking it and shaking it can I? It's just the rhythm set up in the first line should be adhered to. I think...
It's a dee-DAH rhythm.
weak/strong, weak/strong, weak/strong, weak/strong
The sentiment expressed is wonderful, and simple, and plainly said in a brief, almost haiku of a poem.
Yeah that sounds good too, you're good at rearranging my stuff aren't you? lol..Thanks Nick;)
the canadian ninja
short and beautiful.
Thank You for taking the time to comment:)
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