Pausing

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just more expression

Pausing

in

Submission

of wisdom

the

light

of life

transcending

pain

tresspassing

lines

to

death

tasting

bitter

sweet

of unexpectancies

nurturing

the learning

of

our

frailty


Submitted: July 05, 2007

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Saturday Night

Excellent!

Thu, July 5th, 2007 11:13pm

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Thank you so much!

Thu, July 5th, 2007 7:48pm

devilrod

I love this style of yours.

Fri, July 6th, 2007 2:28am

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I'm happy that you love!

Thu, July 5th, 2007 7:53pm

zephyrmail

me too :)

Sat, July 7th, 2007 11:15am

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:):)

Sat, July 7th, 2007 3:11pm

air

i don't know leesah--this says sooo much and it is so beautfully written. I can feel the depth and truth into each word of each line--it seems as though insight has found a hole and is pouring through you.
great peice-

Sun, July 8th, 2007 11:55pm

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Yes..I guess you can say that...I guess adversity and circumstance can play such a powerful role in that. We channel that out through words..which I'm thankful that when I'm lucky that it happens....thank you for your words

Fri, July 13th, 2007 11:09am

EdwardJBradleySr

leesah:

Most beautiful and thought provoking. Soothing and reassuring. Enjoyable and relaxing.

Liked it. A lot.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Thu, July 12th, 2007 2:46am

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Thank you Ed..

Sun, July 15th, 2007 8:27pm

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