you definately have a way
crawling into my heart
so softly now
nothing like you
and I'm drowning in you
nothing could amuse me then
I was hard and tired
until ...you...
so you've got me tied
to your eyes
the ways you touch
makes me need it more
and it's not enough
through you,
I have discovered a way
to live better
and my soul seems to not complain
everything is suddenly in it's place
because of you
rivers, oceans, overflow with gratitude
Submitted: April 30, 2007
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Sweet one
Mon, April 30th, 2007 7:33am
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well..thank you zanie:)
Mon, April 30th, 2007 4:02pm
Encore! Well written, full of gratitude of love :) A lil' different to some of your others too. Excellant work leesah! 5/5
Mon, April 30th, 2007 7:14pm
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Aw pseudo thank you soo much:)
Mon, April 30th, 2007 4:03pm
Very pretty poem Leesah. Loved it! SN
Tue, May 1st, 2007 4:50am
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Thank you SN! YOU keep up the great writing! You got some awesome pieces lately:) Write on!
Tue, May 1st, 2007 2:33am
yea --it does change how you see things----very pretty, leesah :)
Tue, May 1st, 2007 5:14am
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Thank you dear amiga! How are you??
Tue, May 1st, 2007 2:33am
so you've got me tied
to your eyes.....
Wonderful read...nice..keep up..
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devilrod
Wow, that's awesome.
Mon, April 30th, 2007 6:19amgood one...
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thank you rod:)
Mon, April 30th, 2007 4:02pm