Out of Place Life

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Do you ever feel
Kind of out of place
No one understands
Why you're all that way

Do you ever feel
Kind of out of place
No one understands
Why you’re all that way
Have you ever known
What’s inside of you?
It’s bursting through
It’s here for you

It’s in your life
It’s in your mind
It’s out of place
It’s right outside
It’s here for you
And now you’ll find
What’s been hiding
in your mind

Have you ever seen
Things that don’t make sense
When you wish for strength
Of heart and mind
Misunderstood
And loving life
Two opposites
In life they’ll find 

It’s in your life
It’s in your mind
It’s out of place
It’s right outside
It’s here for you
And now you’ll find
What’s been hiding
in your mind

Life is a path
that is found amidst
our answers to silent prayers
When we come together
And we understand
The part of our lives
That will never end.?

It’s in your life
It’s in your mind
It’s out of place
It’s right outside
It’s here for you
And now you’ll find
What’s been hiding
in your mind

When you’re out of place
Misunderstood
Living life
Fighting through
You will see
what you’ve gone through
Your strength of mind
And heart
It’s you.


Submitted: December 03, 2009

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Chrysta

This is great, I like the represtentation of growing strong and finding yourself.

Fri, December 4th, 2009 2:44pm

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yeah. would you believe I wrote this back when I was like 14? lol. and have you tried allpoetry again yet? thanks for commenting... :-)

Sat, December 5th, 2009 6:59pm

Sara Blake

I love the feelings expressed trough this poem...it's somth I can relate too >//

Mon, December 14th, 2009 6:29pm

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Yeah, thanks! why do you say you can relate though? thanks for commenting! :)

Mon, December 14th, 2009 1:30pm

SecretValentine

I'll tell you, I do feel out of place sometimes. Like everyone else is in the circle, and I'm on the outs. But I like the growing strong representation... not that it's something I've done yet ;D

Thu, January 7th, 2010 7:53am

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What do you mean the growing strong representation? And totally ik exactly what you mean all too well....sadly I have waaaaaaaaay too many instances that I have personal application of exactly what you are talking about...Also I think you are not as right about that last comment as you might know...I mean I don't even know you, but I think that you are stronger than you think, just based on your writing and your comments... :)

Thu, January 7th, 2010 9:24am

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