Swimming pool terror

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic
Descriptive writing piece i did in school, Got C* for it.

Submitted: November 27, 2013

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The strong aroma of chlorine attacked his nostrils violently, the muscles began to contact worryingly.

He eventually managed to submerge himself, but was only to be confronted by the same horrorfying images that drove him to this place.The water around him managed to collapse into his lungs, and the vast space around him began to contract.

He clawed his way out of the horrid test that he was confronted with, he crawled up into a ball and started jerking like road kill, Spectators began to gaze with disgust while others turned away. Blood replaced tears as he proceeded to cry himself to sleep like an unattended baby.

He looked up to witnees death himself starring him dead in the eye like a lion stalking it's prey, a piercing sound filled the space around him, His eyes started to burn painfully, he was met with a blinding light before passing out.


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