In My Heaven

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just a warning: this si in no way religious. it's in a spider monkeys perspective. so yea. enjoy and comment away. always gotta love constructive criticism too!
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this is for Alice Oiseau's challenge.
subject: spider monkey
setting: rainforest
words: spirit/ freedom/ violin/ chocolate/ bananas/ and dreaming

Submitted: June 20, 2008

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In the rainforest,

a spider monkey, like me,

has the freedom to do

whatever we wish.

With my spirit swingin' high

as the trees,

I start dreaming of wonderous things:

Tens of thousands of

bananas,

sweet as chocolate

can be.

The noise of my kin,

speaking to each other

in our own mysterious language,

sounds as pleasant as a violin.

And best of all,

the feeling of rain going

drip

drip

drip

onto my fur.

All these things together

make up the best heaven

there can ever be inside the great, big

rainforest.


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