Patience for you and me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
i wrote this for the OHSHCKaori challenge. my word was patience and the relationship was between and aunt and niece. this is the first time ive written about an aunt and niece, so this poem is very choppy. tell me what i can to do fix it up a bit.

Submitted: June 18, 2008

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The aunt and niece

do not live in harmony.

Their world is in turmoil.

The niece's mother is dead

and the aunt's sister is gone.

Now they are in a sad denial.

The aunt and niece do no like each other.

There is no patience in their love.

What must an aunt and niece do

to become a complete family once more.


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