*Rough Draft* Broken Bonds

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic


Warning: This is a very rough draft I made when I was fourteen and I am currently rewriting it now with a much greater grasp on literature and creative writing, thank you 4/22/18



This is a story of a nine-year-old child who's life goes from carefree to a living nightmare. The boys name is Leon R Frair. Leo has a fraternal twin brother named Donte. Their parents Alease and
Gregory have been with them their whole life and did everything to keep them happy. They had finally earned enough money to move into the peaceful country where they felt they couldn't be happier.
They were as happy as could be until April 5, 2007, three days after Leon's and Donte's birthday.

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The Beginning

Submitted: December 08, 2013

This is a story of a nine year old child who's life goes from carefree to a living nightmare. The boys name is Leon R Frair. Leo has a fraternal twin brother named Donte. Their parents Alease and Gregory have been with them their whole life and did everything to keep them happy. They had finally earned enough money to move into the peaceful country where they felt they couldn't be happier. They were as happy as could be until April 5, 2007, three days after Leon's and Donte's birthday. Read Chapter

One Bond Severed

Submitted: December 08, 2013

Chapter 2 Everything was black, dingy, and soundless. Out of nowhere a voice spoke. "Leo," said the voice similar to that of Alea... Read Chapter

New Home, New Friend

Submitted: December 11, 2013

Chapter 3 Leo sat there in a chair in Zane's office. Leo was in a stray jacket, shackles, and chained to the chair he sat in. "In... Read Chapter

Old Bonds

Submitted: December 11, 2013

Chapter 4 Leo immediately jumped up in shock and stared at the now human and nude Clair. Clair however just sat there and stared at h... Read Chapter

Bonds Forged and Rediscovered

Submitted: December 12, 2013

Chapter 5 Willow and her father were sitting in the living room with the unconscious Leo when there was a knocking at the door. ... Read Chapter

Night To Remember

Submitted: December 13, 2013

Chapter 6 Leo awoke and noticed that Clair wasn't there. As he got up he heard her yelling across the house. "Leo, come to the ... Read Chapter

Bonds Without Control

Submitted: December 22, 2013

Chapter 7 Leo awoke in a fiery area with his shirt seared to almost nothing. Leo looked around to try to find Willow but the smoke ... Read Chapter

Unsavable Bonds

Submitted: December 22, 2013

Chapter 8 Borus was driving his large black truck in the direction of a large stone building that looked the spitting image of a pr... Read Chapter

New Trouble Arrises

Submitted: January 29, 2014

Chapter 9 "How do you know," Leo asked with fear in his voice. "I saw everything at the carnival, Leo what," Willow asked. "C... Read Chapter

The First Day

Submitted: April 25, 2014

Chapter 10 Clair awoke on the couch and looked down at her leg. She smiled at the thought of Leo going to the trouble of giving her f... Read Chapter

Light Vs Dark/ The general basis of powers.

Submitted: June 01, 2014

Chapter 11 Dyke quickly ran up to Chris and attempted to punch him in the face with his darkness emitting fist. With ease Chris caugh... Read Chapter

Truths Revealed

Submitted: June 08, 2014

Chapter 12 Willow and Chris stood in shock at there friend being sent flying out the window. Clair however just looked annoyed, not a... Read Chapter

The First Move Commences

Submitted: June 08, 2014

Chapter 13 Chris, Liz, and Clair all ran outside to the unbreathing bodies of Willow and Leo. "I'm going to try to save Willow, L... Read Chapter

Testing Your Metal

Submitted: June 10, 2014

Chapter 14 Antonio threw the table aside and grabbed Leo by the throat. He then hurled him across the street into an office building.... Read Chapter

The Letter

Submitted: June 10, 2014

Chapter 15 Leo awoke on the floor of his living room. Chris and Willow were asleep on the couch. Leo got up and walked into the bathr... Read Chapter

The Ultimate Challenge

Submitted: June 10, 2014

Chapter 16 Clair stopped kissing Leo and they starred at each other in shock. Leo blown away at what just happened and Clair realizin... Read Chapter

The Return

Submitted: June 10, 2014

Chapter 17 *Six weeks later* Leo stood before a mirror, the liquid metal counter part in his reflection. He grabbed the liquid me... Read Chapter

Guess Who's Back

Submitted: June 11, 2014

Chapter 18 Leo still stunned at the sight of Willow hugging then kissing another man just turned his back to them and walked away. Wh... Read Chapter

The Attack Plan

Submitted: June 11, 2014

Chapter 19 Liz walked by the entrance to the pier and saw Leo and Clair still kissing. She got an evil smile as she took a deep breat... Read Chapter

The Attack Commences

Submitted: June 11, 2014

Chapter 20 Everyone stood at the front door, serious looks in their eyes. However this look vanished when they all had the same thoug... Read Chapter

Metal On Metal

Submitted: June 12, 2014

Chapter 21 Antonio stood in front of the boxes, the door out of the room to his side. Liz, Dyke, Chris stood waiting to get to the do... Read Chapter

When Darkness Meets The Light

Submitted: June 12, 2014

Chapter 22 Chris and Liz stepped back from Dyke as black shadows started to spread from his feet over the floor. Thomas just smirked ... Read Chapter

Parents

Submitted: June 12, 2014

Chapter 23 Chris pulled Liz up from the hole, than having her fall on top of him crying. Dyke walked in and immediately noticed Willo... Read Chapter

No Escape

Submitted: June 12, 2014

Chapter 24 Leo awoke in the living room on his hospital bed, dizzy, distorted, and still partly blinded. Leo stood up and when the ro... Read Chapter

April 5th

Submitted: June 12, 2014

Chapter 25 Leo turned around and ran to his room quickly. He threw off his clothes and got changed into some black dress pants with a... Read Chapter

Leo's Weakness Discovered

Submitted: June 12, 2014

Chapter 26 Leo stood in his room held back to the wall by Dyke. He grabbed Dyke's hands and freed himself from his grip. "Do... Read Chapter

It's Party Time!

Submitted: June 13, 2014

Chapter 27 Leo awoke later in the living room. As he sat up the ice pack over his eyes on his forehead fell of and he saw a tiger run... Read Chapter

The Cost Of Power

Submitted: June 13, 2014

Chapter 28 Leo spun around and swung his blade hand at Zane. He easily dodged the sword by inches and continue to do so as Leo k... Read Chapter

In The Hospital pt.1

Submitted: June 13, 2014

Chapter 29 Leo laid in a hospital room, sleep in bed. His body wears a suit of bandages over every part of him to be seen except from... Read Chapter

In The Hospital pt.2

Submitted: June 13, 2014

Chapter 30 Leo stood up but had to use the bed to carry most of is weight. Rose quickly grabbed his arm and stopped him from walking ... Read Chapter

Reinforcements

Submitted: June 14, 2014

Chapter 31 Everyone sat in the living room, staring at Sheapord unable to process the unbelievable news he has made present. "I w... Read Chapter

Answers

Submitted: June 14, 2014

Chapter 32 The next morning everyone sat in the living room eating breakfast while Willow open the box from her dad. She only opened ... Read Chapter

Leo's True Feelings

Submitted: June 15, 2014

Chapter 33 *One week later* The house was quiet and lonesome. Dust had gathered on all the furniture and TVs for the past week. T... Read Chapter

The Wolf, The Tiger, and The Tyrannosaurus Rex

Submitted: June 15, 2014

Chapter 34 As Rose and Clair prepared to attack the dinosaur it stopped and turned back to Lance in human form. "Rose, I didn't b... Read Chapter

A Storm's Coming

Submitted: June 15, 2014

Chapter 35 Before Dan could make another move Willow picked him up with her water hand and tossed him up in the air. Liz shot up into... Read Chapter

No Such Thing As Peace

Submitted: June 16, 2014

Chapter 36 Anna, Antonio, and Mathew were all just sitting talking on the road peacefully. "So, what is your power," Anna asked. ... Read Chapter

A Mother's Regret

Submitted: June 16, 2014

Chapter 37 Leo stood next to Borus, powerless. He looked at the other end of the road and glared at not only the woman who Leo promis... Read Chapter

Suns Of The Shadows

Submitted: June 16, 2014

Chapter 38 Dyke and Chris stood before the house with Johnathon. The man who has been the cause of their pain and the pain of their f... Read Chapter

Shopping!

Submitted: June 17, 2014

Chapter 39 At the home of Leo and the rest of the group the sun was starting the rise. In the living room everyone laid on their hosp... Read Chapter

Unexpected Guest

Submitted: June 17, 2014

Chapter 40 Dyke jumped out of the bushes, scared to death by the ambush that was his sister's voice. "Shit, you scared me," Dyke ... Read Chapter

Crazy Morning To A Crazy Night

Submitted: June 17, 2014

Chapter 41 Leo awoke in his room, feeling oddly calm, relaxed, and refreshed. After a long time he finally felt safe. He noticed Clai... Read Chapter

Prom

Submitted: June 17, 2014

Chapter 42 The limo pulled in at the front of the school and everyone got out and entered the building. There was loud yells and laug... Read Chapter

The Final Plan

Submitted: June 17, 2014

Chapter 43 Special agent Zach Wells sat in the living room and Antonio brought him a cup of coffee. "Well thank you sir, do you a... Read Chapter

Breaking a Man

Submitted: June 17, 2014

Chapter 44 Everyone sat in Sheapord's car, still in front of their house. They all were thinking hard trying to figure out how to get... Read Chapter

Battle of The Beasts

Submitted: June 17, 2014

Chapter 45 Everyone jumped out of the truck and Philips was taken home by Sheapord in a millisecond. They all started running for the... Read Chapter

Darkness of One's Heart

Submitted: June 17, 2014

Chapter 46 Jordan quickly charged Dyke with his hand glowing pink and reached for his face. Dyke dropped to the ground and while hold... Read Chapter

The Elimination Squad

Submitted: June 18, 2014

Chapter 47 Clair turned into a black wolf with white tribal symbols and shot forward at Fox. Just as she was about to touch him Wolf ... Read Chapter

Wolf Vs Wolf / Monster Vs Monster

Submitted: June 18, 2014

Chapter 48 Clair in sixth beast form and Wolf went through a wall into a small guards chamber, empty of guards. The two of them ... Read Chapter

Bonds of Brothers

Submitted: June 18, 2014

Chapter 49 Donte quickly dropped to Willow's side and picked her up in his arms, scared to death of what he has done. "Donte, you... Read Chapter

The Fox-Neil

Submitted: June 18, 2014

Chapter 50 Clair opened her eyes to find herself on the floor of a living with everyone else passed out. The house didn't seem famili... Read Chapter

Family Burdens

Submitted: June 18, 2014

Chapter 51 Everyone was frozen in fear at the sight of Leo. But everything about Wolf started to make sense. How he could take all th... Read Chapter

The After Math

Submitted: June 18, 2014

Chapter 52 It has been two weeks since the the death of Leo Frair. Everyone is now sitting in a church where Leo and his parents coff... Read Chapter

Theft

Submitted: June 18, 2014

Chapter 53 Sheapord was sitting outside on the porch reading the newspaper with some coffee next to him. Zach walked onto the porch a... Read Chapter

The End?

Submitted: June 18, 2014

Chapter 54 *Three Months Later* It has been three months since the death of Leo Frair. Now all of his friends have done good at l... Read Chapter