Mother Land

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic
In the year 2056, Civil War again threatens the United Sates, this time the Northeast yearning for separation. Peter Franklin and his family try to remain loyal to their country while remaining beneath the eye of self proclaimed dictator,Nancy Pallock. It isn't until his family is forcibly separated and his world turned upside down that Peter realizes his involvement in this conflict is deeper, darker, and much more complicated than he thought.

I have been writing this for over 2 years now, and as you can guess, my writing has changed throughout the story. If you would be so kind as to bear with the hollow beginning, any feedback at all would be great. Should I write a Part II?

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Mother Land

Submitted: November 29, 2009

In the year 2056, Civil War again threatens the United Sates, this time the Northeast yearning for separation. Peter Franklin and his family try to remain loyal to their country while remaining beneath the eye of self proclaimed dictator,Nancy Pallock. It isn't until his family is forcibly separated and his world turned upside down that Peter realizes his involvement in this conflict is deeper, darker, and much more complicated than he thought.

I have been writing this for over 2 years now, and as you can guess, my writing has changed throughout the story. If you would be so kind as to bear with the hollow beginning, any feedback at all would be great. Should I write a Part II?
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Submitted: November 29, 2009

Peter didn’t wake up gradually. He woke up all at once. A bump jolted the truck as Peter came-to. He shook his head and blinked several... Read Chapter

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