shared pain

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Gay and Lesbian  |  House: Booksie Classic

a poem about how lost some people feel in fact this one in particular is about how a friend of mine being gay like me, dealt with constant bullying and how she almost took her life do to it

shared pain

i will tame

this pain

put it on a train

going nowhere

she said

and bleed

one street

where we will meet

a razor blade

which was never made

a cut so deep

that it will seep

nothing but red

on this bed

dug a grave

in this i must save

one last chance

to take this dance

shared pain

noone left to blame


Submitted: April 05, 2012

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Vampy2034

Again, very powerful. I love your style of poetry.

Thu, April 5th, 2012 5:59pm

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thank you :)

Thu, April 5th, 2012 11:26am

Vampy2034

It is very hard to be different, people are shallow minded and ignorant. NEVER let anyone get you down. I have been harassed because I have dated women and been intimate with women. I just ignore it. If it gets violent, report it. Get away from the problem as best as you can. Always have a friend who has your back.

Thu, April 5th, 2012 6:04pm

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its not me honey its my best friend, i am the friend that wards the idiots off, for whatever reason no one dares to try that with me. she on the other hand isnt as strong i love her dearly, and have almost got into several fights to protect her she's my innocence angel

Thu, April 5th, 2012 11:24am

Vampy2034

I know I just felt like preaching my opinion. I am good at that it seems xD

I have a friend like that. She is so innocent but people are always trying to tear her down. I don't tolerate it.

Thu, April 5th, 2012 7:05pm

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me and you both i stomp it into the dirt, she's a bright light in this horrible dark world i wont allow anyone to put that light out

Mon, April 16th, 2012 5:02am

inspiredbylove22

Really insightful poem, powerful. I find it so sad that people can allow opinions of others affect them so much. As you are writing about a friend I admire your ability to see through her eyes and express it in words. I have a feeling that she values you, more than you may know, as a true friend :)

Thu, April 5th, 2012 10:28pm

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whether she does or not shes my sister and i could never leave her

Mon, April 16th, 2012 5:00am

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