this one is kind of hard to explain

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

this one is kinda hard to explain

Trance

half dead

nothing to be said

need to rest

tried my best

must confess

the rest

knocked down

to the ground

black as night

yet another fight

tears run

no more fun

 i see the road

must say goodbye to my humble abode

death is true

the light is gone

i will never see another dawn


Submitted: April 05, 2012

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Vampy2034

It needs no explanation.
I love the pwoer and emotion that you express with every short line.

Thu, April 5th, 2012 7:08pm

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thank you i appreciate your input

Mon, April 16th, 2012 5:00am

Insane Membrane

oh baby .... too too sad but written beautifully

Fri, April 6th, 2012 12:12am

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thanks but i know its sad the idea i couldnt even explain its jest there

Mon, April 16th, 2012 4:59am

SPURIOUS

I enjoy reading your work. You find a way to express the emotion and explain the story however your words are simple and short. It's genius :) Keep up the great work XD

Fri, April 20th, 2012 12:27pm

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thanks for your input and I'll keep them coming :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 5:33am

HelloMyNameIsFearless

Love this

Wed, May 9th, 2012 11:44pm

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thank you :)

Thu, May 10th, 2012 7:12am

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