will it take me?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

simple poem inspired by one of my close and dear childhood friends who a couple of years ago, had a brain tumor thankfully she survived but this is written on the pain i could see in her eyes

The disease

i have the seed

which has the need

it strives

to be alive

it will never die

with such lies

it is a problem that cannot be solved

by those involved

that clock

it will mock

me, while it it ticks

i will always be sick

until that fatal day comes

i will always be loved by some


Submitted: April 05, 2012

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VelvetAssassin

I like this - I can relate! In July last year I was diagnosed with Cervical Cancer, I have 2 young daughters & was absolutely terrified they'd be left without a mum.

Thu, April 5th, 2012 5:36pm

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her pain was a bit much for me, i've known her so long shes like my other half, i was so relieved when the treatment worked i cried

Thu, April 5th, 2012 11:29am

Vampy2034

So powerful.

Thu, April 5th, 2012 5:57pm

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it spoke to me, her pain was a little too much for me to handle at times i had to express it some how

Thu, April 5th, 2012 11:27am

HelloMyNameIsFearless

That's like awesomeness on a platter right there. Well done =)

Wed, May 9th, 2012 9:08pm

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haha thank you, means a lot :)

Thu, May 10th, 2012 7:13am

teddi tee

... You actually made me cry. I've lost loved ones to cancer. And I'm not very friendly with doctors that want me to do blood tests.
And I'm starting to freak out about how much we have incommon too ha ha x)
Well done with this, truly amazing.

Sun, May 27th, 2012 4:00pm

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why thank you :) and i know its all really scary i wish they would hurry and find the cure already

Sun, May 27th, 2012 9:05am

Just soul143

Aw this makes me want to cry:/ but I like it good job:)

Sat, June 2nd, 2012 10:56pm

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the emotion it expresses is real, so i thank you i wasnt sure i could capture the raw emotion

Sun, July 1st, 2012 9:15am

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