The love note

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
A girl gets a love note

Submitted: July 25, 2013

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There I lay, confused and curious. His scent radiates off it tingling my spine. But it could also just be a dirty trick played by one of his friends. I thought about calling Britney to see what i should do. Then i remembered she was away for the vacation. I couldn't help not letting go of the note. And i couldn't help but read it again. "Dearest Monica, have you ever just looked up and noticed a new flower blossoming with firey torching radiance? Today in math I looked up from Mr. Petersons long ass lecture and I noticed that flower that I never saw before. I just looked up and there you were. Radiating emotions i never felt. I keep replaying in my mind the sound of your voice sweet, soothing, and melancholy. Meet me at the park on Memorial day if your interested."

Im lost in emotions that I myself never felt before. I been hoping he'd notice me for forever and now i finally have a note. But i don't know if I could take if he wasn't there. I'll go and see him. Thats what i'll do. Its a date...a plan. Yeah, a plan not a date. Who said anything about a date. Right no shit I'm rambling and i can feel I'm blushing. But if he's not there i don't know i could take that. Oh yes! Brilliant I can tell Vic to meet me in the park and then if he doesn't show up and its a prank, i can be note what note. I saw a scrap and threw it out, I'm here with my bud my girlfriend. Wait, then they'll tell Parker I'm gay. And I'm not I want him. Well i mean Vic is pretty and all but i like guys. CLOTHES!!! I need a new shirt, wait then i need a new skirt. Ok new shirt new skirt...no money...all my clothes are sloppy either from painting or just roughing around. Theres always the five finger...no i couldn't shop lift. But he's hot. Theres hot and then theres v waist, 6 pak, bulging pectoral hot. He's the one you shop lift for the second one. Wait my sisters clothes. Shes a bit of a slut but shes bigger then me they should just fit fine. But if he doesn't show people will wonder why I'm so dressed up when i wear hoodies and ripped jeans. He likes me for who i am...thats parent garbage. Wait he could maybe he does. Im unique i got a cute button nose, soft red hair, gentle eyes, play video games, play bass. Thats all good right? But I'm boing as fuck. I already know our first date. Picnic in the park, same park and i can tell him all the stress i went through, and we can laugh, or maybe it'd be creepy. Then laser tag. And a movie. I'll pretend to be scared and jump into his arms and he'll hold me. Oh wait then i may come off clingy. I just need to try to sleep

Saturday

Two more days i can hardly wait.

Sunday

I need to calm down and sleep i need my beauty rest.

Memorial Day

Fuck it. He wont be there it will be a waist of my time people will know i like him and i'll be the laughing stock of the school and my high school career will be over. My year book caption will read most gullible.

Memorial Day noon at the park

Why did I go. Crap! I forgot to call...whats her name my mind is so blank just i know he wont show. 1...2...3.......he should be here. Almost as if a hollywood movie a bolt of lightning strikes the sky and rain falls. I walk away slowly, my head hung low. I pick up my head to look up... No one. Damn day dreams hopes and expectations.

Well thats the tale of the worst memorial day i ever had.

Later that night i didnt want to eat or talk or drink or live. I just wanted to walk around catch my breath, think and regroup. After awhile i circled back home. Went up stairs and laid on my bed. Until i was startled by a tink sound on my window i looked out wondering if it was hail. I looked down and saw a pebble a note and flowers. It read "My mother came down ill. But is now asleep and my father is home. I dont know about you but i never kissed a girl in the rain. Again if your interested...this time i'll be there...Parker." I didn't waist a moments breath i went to the park and their parker was waiting for me on the swings.


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