Poem by: Lex The Damned
Submitted: November 05, 2006
Kiss me ‘till it bleeds
Kiss me deadly,
Kiss the life back into me,
Kiss me ‘till it bleeds,
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short sweet and to the point pretty good
thank you, good comments are always welcome
I like it. Would love to see you add more to it. very dark and deep. Says a ton to the reader with only a few words. Very good.
Like your screen name as well. Might write a poem around it. It's very inspiring.
All the best,
Thank you, good comments are always welcome. Thanks for the thought on my screen name. I'll try and write something regarding the philosophy of damnation.
great poem and i love the title as well.
i also loved how the line "kiss the life back into me" made me feel, a bit strange, it made me feel in an unexplainable way that i've never felt before, maybe a little jealous that someone feels this way about another person's kiss and not mine.
it was short and brilliant and don't add anything onto it.
Thank you for a cool coment.
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