This is about an ex-girlfriend of mine. she was my one and only true love. not anymore.

I can’t wait till the day
When you realize you miss me
By then I’ll have moved on
And found someone who really cares
And when that day comes
You’ll know then how I feel now
Yeah baby, there’s something you gotta learn
Love’s a vicious battle, and there’s only one way to win
You gotta be open
You gotta be true
You gotta be honest and trusting
You gotta be everything I was for you
I remember the promises we made
I remember the promises you broke
You were my true love, still are
But you killed me inside
And I’m done with you babe
Now you want me back
Now you say you’re sorry
Well you know what baby?
You should be
The pain you put me through is unforgivable
The heartbreak you caused is irreversible
You say you don’t know what you were thinking
Well, whatever it was, I just don’t care anymore
Love’s a vicious battle baby,
Get used to it

Submitted: March 29, 2008

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this is a really good poem, it's so true. I liked the emotion. breaking up is really sad, but usually there's a reason, a true deep meaning. it;s good that you're moving on, you'll find someone else, there are a lot of people in this world. but great writing!

Sat, March 29th, 2008 9:14pm


Thanks a lot! :)

Sat, March 29th, 2008 2:18pm

Ghiradelli Girl

Oh wow! This is like some movie I watched a couple of days ago. Your poem really shows a lot of emotion-- it kind've reminded me of a song when I read the second stanza^-^! I'm clicking on the like-it button:).

Lot's of special chocolate to you,

Ghiradelli Girl.

Sun, March 30th, 2008 12:43am


Thanks :)

Sun, March 30th, 2008 11:12am


Thats getting it out

Sun, March 30th, 2008 2:10am


Wow, a lot of emotion in this poem. It's powerful to state those things. I really like the first stanza, and the rhymes here and there. Though I would have left out babe and baby because for me it messed up the flow a bit. Still a great read, and you have much talent:)

Sun, March 30th, 2008 6:53pm


thanks for the advice. :)

Sun, March 30th, 2008 12:26pm

Hugs and kisses

I agree with Ghiradelli Girl, it sounds a lot like a song. It could BE a song if you wanted it to be ^_^ But I really liked it. The poem was honest and I liked the whole. Thing. I'm going to click the "I liked it" button ^_^

Sun, March 30th, 2008 8:56pm


Thanks so much. :)
i have a guitar arrangement, but i haven't tried fitting them together.

Sun, March 30th, 2008 4:50pm


I've gone through something just like this before. It's the worst thing in thw world. Great poem, I really liked it. Keep up the good work. :D

Mon, March 31st, 2008 2:31am


Thank you. :)

Mon, March 31st, 2008 3:33pm


That poem was amazing! I probably liked it so much because I can relate. When u said "you gotta be everything i was for you" omg that was great. ull find a girl that'll treat u right. keep writing!

Mon, March 31st, 2008 2:56am


Thank you. :)

Mon, March 31st, 2008 3:33pm

Naughty girl

Love is a complicated thing, and sex and love isn't necessarely the same thing. When I worked as a call girl I sold sex and I had customers who in their fantasies thought boughy love.
I liked this poem about moving on and not going back.

Sat, May 10th, 2008 4:39am

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