i just lost someone who was my best friend. it was all my fault of course. but this about a new friend. she made me feel like i was actually worth something.

You’re my only true friend
You’ve been by me for so long
I felt nothing, no pain
No grief, no sadness
As feeling returns,
To my poor travelers soul,
I can't help but wonder,
When my next unintentional victim,
Will arise to feel the pain and grief I cause.

Submitted: March 29, 2008

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Maybe time to sit and think

Sun, March 30th, 2008 2:22am


this is really good! I like the words you choose.
Don't be so hard on yourself, you don't cause people grief... don't blame yourself all the time. You seem like a really nice person, and for you to be so down isn't good.

Sun, March 30th, 2008 2:49am


thanks for the support. :) i'll try.

Sun, March 30th, 2008 12:24pm


Sort but sweet. Loved it. I know the feeling, too. Wonderful poem!

Mon, March 31st, 2008 2:32am


Thanks so much! :)

Mon, March 31st, 2008 3:33pm

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