In Way Too Deep

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Fighting...

In too deep

Sometimes

I worry about what I´m doing

walking through darkness

without even knowing

what for!

I am stuck

in this worthless war

I can´t stop

when I´ve come this far

too many words

too many hits

they hurt

they hurt!

How to make peace

when we´re in

way too deep?


Submitted: July 12, 2012

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Lena87

I have felt this way before so many times. I really like this!

Thu, July 12th, 2012 6:51pm

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I´m sorry you had to feel that way too but I´m really glad that you liked it, thank you ;)

Thu, July 12th, 2012 1:10pm

Scripted

I like this piece.

Fri, July 13th, 2012 9:02am

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Thank you :) very much apreciated!

Fri, July 13th, 2012 2:04am

RubyRose81196

Pretty :") And sad. :"( I love it :")

Sun, July 15th, 2012 8:15am

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Aw thank you!!! ;)

Sat, October 6th, 2012 12:21pm

RubyRose81196

though the word pretty was probably too 'light' to describe it...

Sun, July 15th, 2012 8:15am

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Thank you ;) and it isn´t really ugly in my opinion, maybe metaphorically but not in writing, so maybe it isn´t too "light" ;D

Sun, July 15th, 2012 1:50am

DarkLoverz

Amazing Poem its something that everyone feels. I love it, I have felt like this to many times.

Sun, September 30th, 2012 8:52pm

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Thank you ;) and I always like it when people can relate to even if they´re not nice things to feel. You can´t deny it either ;)
thanks for being so awesome :)

Sun, September 30th, 2012 1:58pm

Passion123

This is just a nice poem...it had me thinking about it even after I was done reading it. Good job, lovely! :)

Wed, October 3rd, 2012 8:17pm

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Thanks ^^ What were you thinking about? :D

Wed, October 3rd, 2012 1:31pm

Carlee

This is a very great poem. I loved it! Please stop by to check out my poems & let me know what you think. Id really appreaciate it! Thanks(:

Thu, October 11th, 2012 9:20pm

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okay ;) thanks ^^

Thu, October 11th, 2012 8:28pm

sshani

Looks like there isva whole story behind this onr

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