Who You Are...
Come to me
Like angels from the clouds
I will bow.
What work is it worth
To be who you are,
And to suffer, you know how.
Fallen, scarred and burned.
At midnight they will jump.
And await the loving silence, they have earned.
Copyright Sara Kehrer
Submitted: September 24, 2011
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I totally agree! The words all count! Few is often best when it comes to poetry i have found, but alas i am often long winded ha! Excellent job, good luck in the competition.
Sun, September 25th, 2011 9:20am
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Thank you :D glad you liked it
Sun, September 25th, 2011 3:49am
wow, so powerful, sad and amazing! certainly felt the emotions, GREAT!
Sun, September 25th, 2011 2:56pm
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Thank you :D it´s so nice of you to say. I´m really happy now because people like it :)
Sun, September 25th, 2011 8:30am
nice poem very nice! very short way to tell allot! very nice poem i really like it!
Mon, September 26th, 2011 12:19am
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Wow I'm really glad, thank you!!! :)
Sun, September 25th, 2011 9:26pm
Bravo
Really.
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Thank you :D very much appreciated ;)
Sun, September 25th, 2011 9:25pm
Another judge. my name is Aly
Wow. i agree with Christian. great job!
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Thank you very much :)
Wed, September 28th, 2011 10:06pm
! :D
Thu, September 29th, 2011 2:19am
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:D
Wed, September 28th, 2011 10:07pm
awesome poem . love it
Thu, December 8th, 2011 11:19am
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Awww thank you :D
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Christian Taylor
This is christian...one of the judges of the competition.
Sat, September 24th, 2011 11:38pmI always believed that quality always beats quanity. This is an example how you don't need alot of words to give a poem a voice. This was terrific and I loved the way you structured the poem.
Excellent work!
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Thanks :D this realy means a lot to me!!!!
Sun, September 25th, 2011 12:35am