days are 17

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Science Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic
about undefined feel,the love

Submitted: July 29, 2009

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Submitted: July 29, 2009




Not like the days before,gulzar is a bit earlier.eyes are in search of a catchy sight.Chance is void.Desperately he takes one seat with a coffee.Looks the watch.says"wait". Faces are running out and in. For him,the train station is the same that he had seen years before.Change never pat it.He sweats for a MNC in the city,catching the same train to connect home n office for the past 4-five years.


Today the race is on,him and the lady train. She doesnt left him off.There were days gulzar pissed off,she said bye!!. Now in the seat he is.Abrubtly a plastic wrappper flies and grabs his face,which slips from the girl.She is about to sit there infront of him. He takes the wrapper in hand.Its a napkin cover.He just points the same to her,"excuse me".She is blushy.she sits there without any reflection. After giving a stare at the stuff he sends it out."is toilet free now?".This Q, that the man beside her, has asked,makes her face more pink."yea!".She said freely[gulzar dont think so ].All stay cool.


This day the train is rushy.We all can doubt gulzar,that he has followed the same girl.whatever it is,she is near to him now,right now!.Their eyes striked.The smile he fired went waste.She seems stern as almost all girls do.After a long spell a slight smile is hanging on her face.She hides it turning off herself.He creeps and now he is more close to her."what z the date?"man close to him got the Q.


gulzar:"But the date is 18 man".


gulzar:"ya special date".[looks her,and with a gap of silence,says]."management made ma salary plus,as i works hard"[laughs].

She is about to step down,come closer to him and "but your zip is still open!!!!???.

It was too hitting and electrifying words.Gulzar suddenly checks the shutter and she is true."ooh shit".All starts laughing and a special laugh with a weird tone comes out from the man beside him,the same man.She just left.And he is in search of oxygen.


Gulzar is very carefull.With the sparking eyes as a hunter holds,he moves on the platform.He doesnt want trouble ,seeing her.Deliberate minutes crossed.Train is welcomed by the platform where she left.He is free now,hmm some one seeks her inside him.say,right now,he is free! from the cutie."excuse me,"As he turned ,its her."how the day,god morning!.work hard" with the most beautiful smile on her face that he has ever seen,she moved away.Strange air comes to him.Its a pleasant curve ,on his face.Delighted gulzar,as he finds some thing precious says,

"i have to love you"


No doubt,gulzar is searching for the cutie now.He searches,searches n searches.No looks catched her.His mood seems to ride wrong.He is waiting for the station where she do leave .Finaly the station has came.Among the human flush he starts the scan.It is the same face,she comes out from the same compartment where they met n shared moments.He yells "hi".All are looking at him and she too.For him she stands alone in that range.just got a hand wave from her and its enough there.


This sixth day is the day of dumb language for these creatures.As they lock in the rush ,they fit well ,far eachother.They talk a lot .They talk for a long time.Gulzar doesnt know what she says and she obviously in the same state.He is happy, today too.He comes to the door and says "bye".Train moves taking gulzar n gulzar moves taking her "bye+smile"


Pretty good boy gulzar is now.He is early,rarely he do.She is in the window side and he sits opposite to her.Face to face,as they sat b4.within seconds the lady train is loaded well. He stares at her and she is nervous,a bit.##!!ooh wrong,####she stares at him and gulzar is nervous, cronic nervous.Himalayan task he does,to overcome those.And now he is good n good.



she just get down as the train is on the mark.For gulzar the whole spell was some seconds.He doesnt know,what happened there.


The two humans get into the same train piece.While the start, they were pretty far .But now when the 3rd horn aires he is here ,at the mark.Just like pure strangers. He or she never drags apart.Sometimes shakes bind them.Seats are getting ready rarely.No flags are minded by the two minds.They stand as the train holds huge rush.

Nothing is new.But next seconds!,gulzar grabs her palm.Rough look was pumping out from her to him,which calmed .They look outside,they look at the fan ,they stare at others,they smile. But never look each other and their hands never leave each other till the journey ends.


A fresh journey starts.Gulzar boldly comes near to her,smiles."how are you" she asks the same" how are you"

just rubbing the nails gulzar comments"we both are fine"

That goes good and both smiles now.They couldnt help that.But he holds the same

the talk goes

gulzar:how are u

gal:im fine

gal:how are u

gulzar: me too.

For us the whole stuffs value worse.Sure they are saying something from heart.Obviously they did,they said.He holds her hand.A fine day


After the smiles,gulzar fires ,"im having somethin for u".With her eyebrows she replied.He takes a lunch pack and give to her"i was in kitchen 4 u".gal:"hmmmm..good"." but im having mine"she replys."just give me urs" he solves the problem

"dont accept food from strangers" when she is looking at the railway poster and smiles,he cursors the word "strangers".She was cool and comfortable then.Somethin flashed.Just opened her palm for him.Hands get locked and both are seems.


Gulzar searches the face,that made him nervous, that made him soft,

that made him romantic.The search touches the void end.Desperate guy loose the charm and he is now helpless.Ready to do anything,but nothing to do.Even he dont know how the days moved.


Disturbed mind stands near the door , looking outside .Train moves fast.For a "hi" he just turns back.Hugs the gal who greeted. He missed her in a big way.Great addition is now here.He kisses her.Better than them ,people around them enjoy the shot.Abrubtly she pushes him ,showing the card to him.The card invites him for a marriage of one ROMNIA ANGEL with HARIZ DOMNIC .She moves away after that,with tears n blushy face.He says nothin.Fellows are into them,looking at him.When her station comes,he too steps out.

gulzar:"are you romnia?"

with a scrached and dull voice

gal: "ya,im"

i doubt ,the tears comes from him now seems like blood.when she moves ,

"nice name"

she might be asking herself "romnia who is ur love "and she might be replying

"dont know the name---a good one".

tears only,she left there.

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