Under Winter's Sky

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

A winter poem

Snowflakes fall like glitter
and cover the footprints left
by we who seek silence.
Alone in dark surroundings
the heavens our canopy
stars witness to our love.
 
Though cold winds prevail
and winter unleashes fury
we are here together.
A hand which holds mine
and kisses hot and wet
warm my soul’s core.
 
Your eyes as bright as gems
glisten with that desire
I have come to need.
All is dark and beautiful
here beneath winter skies
with you my love
with you.


Submitted: January 05, 2010

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Mistress of Word Play

Lovely Lily in every aspect possible. I can see you under the sky with snow falling with that special person. Sharing kisses and loving each other. Beautifully penned. I really love the repitition there at the end. May try using that some time myself if you don't care. Great job! Susan :)

Tue, January 5th, 2010 5:39am

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Hi Susan so glad you liked this. Of course my friend use it if you like. I am sure you will write something wonderful. Lily

Tue, January 5th, 2010 3:55pm

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MADNESS IN INK

Gosh this was just beautiful Lily. I adore it. M

Tue, January 5th, 2010 7:44pm

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Thanks M. I appreciate it. Lily

Tue, January 5th, 2010 3:56pm

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NazireC

What a beautiful poem Lily. How wonderful your lines were and carefully formed and constructed.
Truly a fresh breath of air and beautiful talent.
Your word choice was excellent, unifying your mood and tone carefully with the rest of your poem.

Wed, January 6th, 2010 12:31am

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Thanks Nazire you always say the nicest things. Lily

Fri, January 15th, 2010 10:28am

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Shea Ryhai

Sweet write, but some of the lines felt to abrupt or forced together. Good write over all :)

Thu, January 14th, 2010 8:35pm

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Thanks for reading. Lily

Fri, January 15th, 2010 10:28am

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Phasered

Lovely

Fri, January 22nd, 2010 6:19am

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Thanks ever so much. Lily

Fri, January 22nd, 2010 9:42pm

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PaulChafer

hey, I like that, well done, flawless, reminds me of a midnight walk my wife and I took recently with our dog, truly great, you should write more Lily, you have the talent required.
Paul.

Thu, January 28th, 2010 5:19pm

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Thanks so much. I write little these days. Lily

Fri, January 29th, 2010 6:34am

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Chiqui

Wow! as soft as snow is this write Lily. Very well penned- awesome! Smiles Chiqui

Tue, March 30th, 2010 8:18am

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Thanks I like your poems too. Lily

Fri, April 2nd, 2010 9:08pm

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Graeme Montrose

beautiful poem, you got it just right, nicely done!

Mon, June 28th, 2010 8:07am

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