innocent child

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

takes the idea that there is an innocent child in all of us please read feed back would be highly appreciated and im only 14 so spelling may not be great :) thankyou

kids dream of heros

yet little they do know

that so many people are fighting

but little they so show

 

money may be a problem

is food on its way?

to the beaming smile of a child

who has had a playfull day

 

parents and carers

doing their all

to help the family

to stand proud and tall

 

but no matter how old

or where we are

i think we all wish upon

that shooting star

 

as little children

searching land and sea

to find the hero

and live struggle free!


Submitted: April 19, 2012

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sunnyskies

That's a really interesting idea. I like it. Nice work!

Thu, April 19th, 2012 6:34pm

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thankyou comment is highly apriciated along with your opinion :)

Thu, April 19th, 2012 11:58am

Courtney Fields

This is interesting, good work, keep on writing and I will continue to read your works, I hope you do the same for me in future too. Also don't worry about your spelling, mine isn't too great either. :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 6:43am

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thankyou and i sure will and thankyou reassuring to know im not alone :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 10:35am

lesbianrebel94

I don't think any of us give up on those big dreams,I'm pursuing mine as we speak, keep it up you may only be 14 as you like to point out :) but your good

Fri, April 20th, 2012 12:38pm

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thankyou means alot i want to base part of my life on writing :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 10:36am

poetgirl7397

wow this is really good. i would love to read more of ur work. btw im only 14 so dont worry bout ur spelling, when i write i abbreviate so most of the time I cant even tell wat i wrote. lol!

Sat, April 21st, 2012 3:58pm

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Thankyou and feel free to read more there's a bit of everything happy sad reasuring poems on my page and nice to know I'm not alone I don't abriviate but I can not spell to save my life hehe

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 2:35am

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