is it madness

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

people have gotten many meanings from this poem i hope you get your own to.

i understand that you made a mistake,

but this has put our lives at stake

i could reason, try and protest,

but i cannot promis its for the best,

you have made my mind crash and collide

getting into my head, turning my side

this could be the very end of our song

you dont understand what it is thats wrong

because the world against you, and me it seems

they will not listen to our sobs and screams

youve got a good heart i dont want you dead

but they continue putting a gun to your head

they dont understand youe simply shy,

you wont come out so alone i cry

when we talk i do things i shouldnt

but without you i know i couldnt

they say your not there your in my head

want to give me tablets, is it true what they said

the things we have done, now your not real

my guts are turning this i dont feel

but now its time that i say goodbye

to you my friend ive sufferd and cried

ill take a tablet and then ill know

weather your real or if away you go 

Submitted: April 09, 2012

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Ooh I really like this one. I like how you leave it open-ended, with the reader wondering if the person is real or not.

Thu, April 19th, 2012 6:38pm


thankyou and that was the point as leaving it open means that you may get your own interpritaion from the poem ... many thanks for the comment :D

Thu, April 19th, 2012 11:59am

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