Fimilar Darkness

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

The world is a dark place, evil has taken its reins, and there is only one woman left who has a soul left to corrupt. She rides through the fires of hell, see's things unknown to her before, and expierences the dark seduction that is the true Evil...

Okay, some people have been asking what this poem is about. So, I shall oblige their requests.

"The fire soared like a pheonix rising up from the ashes" - That symbolizes Satan coming up from Hell to reign over the Earth for His promised 1,000 years.

" eternal pit of hate..." - means that people are turning against one another. Love is no longer afelt emotion.

"...the death the was oozing..." - the death of the soul, the end of redemption.

"screams of pain" - God's angels crying out for help from Christians.

"condemned her saintly ears" - this tells us that the 'Girl' hears the Angels cries, but can do nothing to help them, and this made her angry, an emotion she had never felt before.

"...poison..." - sin

"...their lips..." - the rest of the world, the people who have renounced thier beliefs for Earthly life.

"God and salvation were things of the past" - Satan finally convereted her to evil, the whole world is now in His hands.

"...essence of evil..." - a once rightious and perfect human being (Jesus in female form) has now been corupted by the Devil. All hope is lost.

The fire soared like a phoenix,

rising from the ashes.

Up and up the flames went,

licking the heavens with

its forked tongues from hell.

Heat washed away all hope;

an eternal pit of hate.

She could smell the death that,

was oozing from the damp walls;

damp with thetears of the innocent.

Screams of pain and distraught-

condemned her saintly ears,

and the poison on their lips

spread like Romeo and Juliet

through out the land.

Sweet whispers of deceit,

hushed desires,

and lustful wrong doings-

were all the senses could pick up.

God and salvation were things of the past.

Inside her was born

the very essence of evil.

Submitted: October 27, 2008

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wow, that's pretty deep. Like it alot!

Tue, October 28th, 2008 3:51am


thank you :D it kinda creeped my friend nat out lol

Tue, October 28th, 2008 5:49am

Alone in the World


Tue, October 28th, 2008 11:13pm


Thank you much :D
I am in LOVE with this lil dark piece of free verse poetry.

Thu, October 30th, 2008 10:09am


Wow I really liked this; it was beautifully tragic and different from a lot of what I have read before. Keep up the breath taking work.
Peace and love.

Thu, October 30th, 2008 10:01pm


thank you.
your comment really made my night :D

Fri, October 31st, 2008 9:25pm

Randi Walters

Well do you believe the thousand is closing,in other words he has been having his way already.please fasten your seatbelts,,,,,,

Mon, November 17th, 2008 3:53am


Maybe Satan has already begun his evil reign over the Earth. For all we know it could have started the day after Jesus asscended into Heaven...

Mon, November 17th, 2008 6:17am

Lindsy Clapp

This is totally my favourite poem I've written thus far. Normally I have rhyhme diease hehe :D but I find that non rhyming poems hit home...

Tue, November 25th, 2008 8:46pm

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