Hang in There

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Make the most of your day

 

 

 

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Submitted: January 16, 2013

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Naan

a few short but powerful words
very well written
thank you :)

Sun, January 20th, 2013 2:10pm

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Thank you Naan for taking the time to read and comment those kind words. May I ask where do the words fall short?

Sun, January 20th, 2013 9:52am

JoelatRpg

This is a very uplifting poem:) It makes me feel good:) Thanks for sharing, Lisa!

Wed, January 23rd, 2013 5:01pm

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Thank you!

Wed, January 23rd, 2013 9:38am

Ava Rosien

I have your inspirations with my morning coffee! Thank you for sharing them.:)

Wed, January 23rd, 2013 7:03pm

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I'm sure you don't need any sugar with your morning coffee, being as sweet as your are, thank you Ava!

Wed, January 23rd, 2013 7:28pm

Naan

oh no my dear it doesn't fall short at all... what I meant was simply that it's a short poem with so little words yet so much meaning and beauty in it :)

Mon, January 28th, 2013 5:54pm

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Thank you Naan for those kind words.

Mon, January 28th, 2013 10:44am

Buffershaker

Although this was very short the message was both elloquently written and very poignant.

Thu, January 31st, 2013 10:55am

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Thank you for your kind words and stopping by Eileen.

Thu, January 31st, 2013 11:34am

Kess

Wow this certainly makes my night,it was beautiful... 2 thumbs up 4 u! :D

Sat, February 2nd, 2013 6:06pm

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Glad you enjoyed it Kess. Thank you for reading and your kind words.

Sat, February 2nd, 2013 12:36pm

Michael Marie

Very sweet, short, and to the point. Very good mood lifter. :)

Sun, February 3rd, 2013 6:26pm

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Thank you Micheal for the kinds words and stopping by, much appreciated.

Sun, February 3rd, 2013 2:52pm

Criss Sole

Wonderful message. Excellent poem. It did inspire me to stay strong, and believe me, I need that.

Tue, February 5th, 2013 12:50pm

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Aww Criss, your kind words are appreciated.
You hang in there, hugs ~Lisa

Tue, February 5th, 2013 4:59am

myheavenmyworld

Hey Lisa! Let me tell you, you've have amazing thoughts and this is very inspirational.

Sat, February 9th, 2013 1:02pm

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Thank you for your kind words and stopping by,much appreciated

Sat, February 9th, 2013 5:13am

ValeriyaPonomar

You write poems in a way that make people think of how they've lived, or maybe that's just me :/
Another like from me!

Thu, February 14th, 2013 4:36am

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Thank you so much!

Wed, February 13th, 2013 10:58pm

Coralie

I'm definitely a fan of your poetry; you really write what you think, and that's not entirely normal on here. What's even more of a rarity is that you write happy, uplifting things that don't feel preachy or worn-out. I liked this! C:

Sun, March 3rd, 2013 6:29am

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Thank you for your kind words Coarlie!

Sat, March 2nd, 2013 11:27pm

zohara ummey hassan

The message is great ! You are so kind !

Tue, March 12th, 2013 4:47pm

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Thank you so much!

Tue, March 12th, 2013 7:58pm

RaeBlair

The type of motivation you hang in your kitchen to see every morning! :)

Tue, March 12th, 2013 7:02pm

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Kind of you to say, thank you! Nice to meet you. Thanks for the fan request.

Tue, March 12th, 2013 8:01pm

LyraHydraComa

Enjoyed reading this selection... short and to the point.

Mon, March 18th, 2013 5:34pm

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Thank you for taking time to read and comment, much appreciated.

Mon, March 18th, 2013 12:57pm

Adam Williamson

Short... Sweet... Beautiful.... Inspiring (Just like this comment ;))

Thu, March 21st, 2013 10:48pm

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Thank you so much!

Thu, March 21st, 2013 3:52pm

city-lights

Such a short and sweet poem, written amazingly and flows very well. No faults. : i really like the message your sending acccross in this poem, very well done! ;)

Fri, August 16th, 2013 3:51am

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Thank you so much Ikky2000

Thu, August 15th, 2013 9:14pm

David S Grayson

Great poem! You too have a way with words, with just five lines you managed to create a beautiful message :D

Thu, August 22nd, 2013 5:49am

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Thank you so kindly for the compliment. You made me smile :)

Wed, August 21st, 2013 10:53pm

Emmett Cohl

This was very nice, beautifully executed. I don't even know how to praise your work or even say thanks any more because I have said it all! Your poetry is definitely something I read whenever the goings get tough. There are special places in Heaven for people like you, Lisa. God bless.
~Emily

Mon, September 2nd, 2013 3:17pm

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Dear Emily, your kinds words mean so much to me. Thank you so much, hug xo

Mon, September 2nd, 2013 3:17pm

SparklingTiara

"Take time to count your blessings along the way" is my favorite line. Some of us tend to forget just how blessed we are. But if we look back and see all the blessings that God gave us, we'd know that we're lucky enough to have Him in our life. This is a beautiful poem. Well done!

Wed, September 18th, 2013 9:03am

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Thank you so much! I appreciate your comment!

Wed, September 18th, 2013 11:42am

Sarah Olympia

These words should be printed on a magnet so one could see them everyday! That's where I put things I love looking at!

Tue, September 24th, 2013 11:19pm

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Thank you Sarah! I appreciate it.

Tue, September 24th, 2013 4:40pm

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