Poem by: Lisa Ayers
Submitted: February 05, 2013
© Copyright 2016 Lisa Ayers . All rights reserved.
really true.... good haiku...
Thank you for your time and thoughtfulness
Short and had a great message. I liked it a lot.
I like this,it's very positive. I love anything that's postive (apart from HIV) sorry, my mind works in weird ways.
lol Ben, its not weird, it's true!
Thank you for your kind comment and taking time to stop by, truly grateful.
Eileen Kathleen Mcbriar
Sometimes Lisa it's easier said than done.My sister is always pestering me and my other half for handouts to ease her credit shortfall.Nicely written.
Hi Eileen, I agree, sometimes it is difficult depending on your surroundings. Unfortunately, we all face negative people and situations from time to time. I think it is best to show them love and offer any help you'e able to give, then move on to your circle of positive people who uplift your spirits.
Best wishes to your sister
Thank you kindly for your time and thoughtfulness, hug ~Lisa
Very good advice! I wish everyone could stick to it.
Thank you Miss Lea!
another wise sentiment.
Great poem you have there!:) KMU.
So, true !
Thanks for reading and commenting, much appreciated
Understand, then let go of bad thoughts, for then they will not return :)
Thanks for coming by Dibs. I hope you enjoyed your stay :)
The only way to describe this haiku would be that it is straight to the point. Short and sweet if you will. Thanks for a great read. I am going to read the second one now.
Thank you for your kind words and fan request.
Bad thoughts drag you and those around you down. I loved this, haikus are so much fun.
Thank you kindly for taking time to read, comment and stopping by. I appreciate it.
Love it! Right to the point and beautifully said.
Thank you Cody. I appreciate it!
David S Grayson
Good advice! We all should follow this message, I really like it.
Thank you David!
lovely :) beautifully written :)
Thank you ShimmerShine
Good haiku.... So much said in so few words... Well done...! Keep Smilin'... Jax
Hi Jax! I appreciate you stopping by! Thank you.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your lovely comment Angellynn.
Hi Lisa, I always Love the Kaiku form. Positive thoughts brought forward in such few words, Positive read for me. It would probably take me more words to say good morning in a poem Lisa. Enjoyed the read. Your Friend always....Vladislav.
Hi Vladislav. I enjoy writing Haikus. I like how the message can still come across in such small amount of words. I'm glad you enjoyed it and lol at you would use more words to say good morning ???? I appreciate you coming by to read and comment. Thank you.
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