Lost and Found with ending #2

Poem by: Lisa Marks

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I'm trying to overcome a personal struggle, poetry is a great catharsis.
Do you like ending #1 or #2 better??

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Submitted: October 18, 2006

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Submitted: October 18, 2006

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delusions of grandeur

swim through my brain

rescuing me from the depths where I've lain

the summit I climbed, a precarious place

the tide I did summon ripped me down on my face

like a toddler unbalanced

shaky and scared

determined to walk

hold my head in the air

tomorrow's my future

it's all up to me

I have the power to finally fly free

soar with the eagle

not a care in the world

if I had one wish

I'd come back as a bird.


© Copyright 2016 Lisa Marks. All rights reserved.

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I'm trying to overcome a personal struggle, poetry is a great catharsis.
Do you like ending #1 or #2 better??
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