Suicide. Murder

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic

My sister commited suicide at 15. because she was pregnant and scared...


.:Suicide .::. Murder:.

She walks down the halls with a smile upon her face…

With her Jet Black hair and her Cherry Oak Skin, all the girls Hate.

The boys drool at her feet,

and begg her to creep.

She denies them any chances and keeps it movin…

She never expects to be one of “those girls”.

Until she meets “her guy” with his golden tan skin and his “jury Curls.”

He tells her he Loves her,

Gives her a kiss and Hugs her.

She’s Fallen…

She thinks to her self if its just a mistake for trusting.

But soon all those thoughts fade by lusting.

Before she knows it they’re deep in their Lesson, smoke sessions and sexin`.

She confides in her “girls”,

He brags to his “boys”.

She tells them she had stomach twirls.

He tells them its like playing with toys.

They meet more often.

Their afternoon talks

Turn into over night lip locks.

Before she knows it,

Shes Glowing!!

She soon realizes its not the happiness showing.

Her stomach is Growing!!

Those night lip locks,

Return to being Just talks.

Still a baby herself,

She looks for some help.

With no success,

She begins to stress.


She does what she feels best...

And puts herself at rest….

The baby is still alive ?!

 With the time ticking

The doctor begins to rush!

His sweat dripping

He hears a soft wisper… “I took the Both of Us.”






Submitted: April 26, 2012

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Oh.. So you wrote this poem for your sister and this is based on her experience?? I don't know what the right words to say but I hope this poem would serve as moral lesson to everyone...

Thu, April 26th, 2012 6:56am


yess . and thaank you .

Thu, April 26th, 2012 7:11am


Wow, It's really hard to express words for a poem like this, so sad and uneasy. I like your words, they're very colorful! The hidden message within the poem is so positive, it could help so many people who are looking at the wrong side. Very nice poem! Keep on writing :)

Thu, April 26th, 2012 7:19am

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