Depression Isn't Popular Where I Live

Short Story by: livingproof

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Life. What's it about anyway? What's the big deal. You live, you die. Deal with it.

Submitted: October 23, 2009

Young Adult

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fairiegirl

Yay i got the first comment! :) Okay firstly, WOW. Secondly, WOW this was such a powerful, amazing poem! It was so moving and within a short poem you can get the reader to sympathise and understand the emotions of the poem and believe me thats not a easy thing to be able to do. Your talented :) I loved this poem and im saving this in my reading list so i can read it again. Life can suck but life cant be good without first being bad. One of the reasons i joined booksie apart for my love of reading and writing is that nobody knows anything about me unless i choose to tell them, they dont judge me on my looks or my backround, booksie is my escape, this was a brilliant poem! x x x

Mon, October 26th, 2009 8:14am

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omg! you feel exactly how i do about booksie!!! oh, and thankyou!!! i love it when people say i can write!!! :)

Mon, October 26th, 2009 4:48am

NazireC

This is cleverly and well done.
I was expecting a short story first though.
I love how you can elegantly with sometimes simple words, and a clear voice you captivate your reader and are able to express such deep emotions.

Tue, October 27th, 2009 12:00pm

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thanks!!! it's kinda a short story kinda poetry, it was an experiment when i first put it up here so thanks! :)

Tue, October 27th, 2009 6:05am