Is This What You Want?

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Is This What You Want?

Status: Finished

Is This What You Want? Is This What You Want?

Poem by: LizLew

Genre: Poetry

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Poem by: LizLew

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Genre: Poetry

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Summary

Tell me what you want, and I'll try my best to give it to you.

Summary

Tell me what you want, and I'll try my best to give it to you.

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Submitted: October 22, 2011

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Submitted: October 22, 2011

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Don’t you know you control me?
Don’t you see it in my poetry?
Can’t you see how in control you are?
Don’t you know your name is forever a beauty scar?
I whisper your name and am given pleasure,
I think of you in dearly leisure.
I kind of want to doodle your name,
You drive me completely insane.
Will you stay away, stay away forever?
I thought we promised that we’d never.
My love for you will survive, live eternally,
But maybe it’s better for you to move on and forget me.
I don’t want to let go, and my heart never will,
But I can leave you alone, despite the me it kills.
If it makes you happy to know I’m dead,
A bullet through my brain and a gun to my head.
I’ll close my eyes, I just need to know,
Is this what you want?


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