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one last attempt

Poem by: lizzie wonder

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BREAK FREE

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Submitted: February 21, 2013

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Submitted: February 21, 2013

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Feel the chain around you

the butterflies are battling

my chest feels like a balloon

you can hear the bomb ticking

 

you cant take it anymore

youve memorised all the doors

and all the cracks and all the windows

 

but theres no tools on this floor

so you use your strength to beat the door

 

you punch and kick and scream out loud

and the tears fall as you sink down

 

and on one last weak attempt

you turn the doorknob to the left

 

you hear the click and suddenly

you know that you where always free

 

 

IM NOT COMPLETLEY DONE YET PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND I DO HOPE TO FINISH IT AND POST THE REST SOON, I HOPE YOU LIKED IT THANKS FOR READING :)


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one last attempt

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Genre: Romance

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