Hidden in an open space

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic


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"What are we going to do if what we have doesn't work?" Glorianne whispered, laying her head on his bare chest; she listened in closely to his every breath. "W--what? What do you mean.. Anne. What makes you think--"

"We are literally hiding from everyone when we want to be around each other. We elude the questions being asked by your father and I already lost your mother's trust.. and so I ask--What if we end this tonight?" Glorianne explained, interrupted Lucas.

Glorianne rested her hands on his chest as she pushed herself up from the bed. She watched him shut his dark eyes and comb his hair with his fingertips.
 "I guess I'll have no choice but to go back with me ex.. beg her to come back to me," Lucas replied with a smirk on the  side of his lips.
 He watched Glorianned, secretly admiring how her face expression had gotten so suddenly, with raised eyebrows and disbelief at how blunt and bold he laid his answer to her.
"You disgust me, I never really meant anything to you.. really, Luke? I'm putting an end to this game of yours."
"Do you want to be with me, Glorianne?" Lucas stared back into her eyes as he held her arms behind her.

"Oh, you can go back to your ex! You filthy--"

"You are my ex. Now I'm begging you, will you come back to me?" He planted a kiss on her chin before she pulled away.
"You're very messed up," she whispered with chuckle of relief.

Submitted: November 26, 2014

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Couple of minor errors.
"He watched Glorianne(d)"
"How her face (facial) expression had gotten so suddenly," - so suddenly what?

Nice twist though.

Wed, November 26th, 2014 9:21pm

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