confessions of the soul; bleeding

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this girl who has had everything she has ever loved or cherished taken from her, and the last thing she has to be taken is herself. shes protecting the last thing she has by taking it away from everyone else.
the last thing she has is her life. (soul)

Submitted: June 26, 2010

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confessions of The Soul; Bleeding

Iwince at the pain

The pain in body and spirit

Iglance down and see the marks im making,

Feel the imprints burned acrossed my soul

Irejoyce as the relieve fills me,

For finally have something to control

Everything is caotic and confusing

Nothing is even understandable

All I've done is make things worse,

But that is,.......... uncontrolable

Ihesitate as sorrow surrounds me,

Cutting me deeper than I do myself

As I gain back my determination,

Tears spill as i make my final move.

As everything goes back, i think to myself

........now ive got nothing else to loose.

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ok, i know. its short and probably not the best but it mean something to me and i thought sharing it wasnt a bad idea...so please let me know what you think, critism and all opinions welcomeof course, much love--savannah


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